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brokenpoet
Jennifer Johnson
United States, WA

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Simply Me

Once upon a time
She was me and I was she
But did that mean I wasn't me?
I had so many uncertainties....

Anxiety had let me be
But sadness never felt a need...
To leave.

Some time went by for she and I
And I and she
And now, my friends, I guarantee
That she's not me and I'm not she....

Now, I'm simply me.

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poetguyraza Comment by: poetguyraza - 2008-02-25 08:20
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When the reader begins reading, it's kinda hard to get. But as they near the end it gets simpler. That's a very good way to write. The theme you chose is brilliant. This was a great read.
redtwinsis Comment by: redtwinsis - 2008-01-13 14:37
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I love this..It's simple but I can relate to it...Great work:)
krptdnacnce Comment by: krptdnacnce - 2008-01-10 23:44
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Not really all that simple though, I know of familiar companions and similar uncertainties, I enjoyed. Thanks for shareing
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