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| When you can engage in such activity sober, thats when its the most rewarding. |
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Comment by: Tyger - 2008-01-24 04:25
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| Snappy! Yep. I like it. |
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| I am not sober at the moment but still say your clever. I love the honesty in your poems. The straight forward nature of your writing is quite refreshing. |
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| Rough and not overthought. I enjoyed this. |
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Comment by: Stratus - 2007-12-30 08:18
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Hi,
I have to qualify myself here - I don't know a thing about poetry. But I liked this. I was able to feel the narrator's self-loathing, regret of self I think. And though there were no images really, I still carried a picture in my head.
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