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obelletto
Oreste Belletto
United States, Ca, Davis

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Orpheus Explains

This is all that’s left.
This. This head,

a prattling tongue.
It flaps and only memory

gives it voice.
There is a kind of looking that kills,

and I’ve got it.
Suiting, as my heart is gone;

my limbs and all of their deeds,
my lungs.

It confirms the dead,
as your tradition of baptism confirms a life.

The spectrum arrives at my soul
where it dies

to tell you.
I have come

to speak of the dead
in exchange for this.






Did I trust her?
Inside the many

voices, I gave song
to one who felt himself

envious and perfect
in her realm, and so he looked.

This is the song.

Listen, and lose your limbs.

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Comment by: - 2008-01-14 03:56
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Death is never an end just as life is never a beginning, let prate with tongue kind sir but cooler heads, far cooler than death, prevail on life's lesson - that love is its own burden to one who must carry it alone. It was never about trust, but about a doubt in the intent of duplicitous gods who gave and took as their whim carried their misanthropy into eternity.
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