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SnDog1011
Richard Bren
United States, Ma, Andover

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Butterflies in my stomach

I love this girl

she takes me places

together we trip

this girl and I

oh my

words cant describe

oh how I feel inside

this girl has beautiful eyes

she can see inside everything

including me

her ways are like magic

she takes me places

together we trip

this girl and I

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DHopton Comment by: DHopton - 2008-01-03 17:45
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Been a long time since I have even seen someone feel this way. However, reading this takes me back. Well done.
Elliott2nd Comment by: Elliott2nd - 2007-12-31 06:36
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I'm moved by the feelings behind this poem... of being truly seen, and loved. Your poem makes me feel how amazing it is to find someone who is like that for us.

I'm wanting to hear more about the places she takes the poet... Where does she take you? What images bubble up around those journeys?

Keep writing! Thanks for sharing from your talent and your feelings.
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