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| Every time I find myself wandering to your page I am amazed to see the growth in your poetry since the first time I read your work. This poem is perfect in its simplicity and all too familiar. What a way to start the new year. Is there any better I wonder... |
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Comment by: fredav - 2008-01-02 08:28
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Beautifully expressed, Jay. Loved the imagery of the mind and the stars. Write some more.
-F |
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Woah! Hang overs can be good? Good work, I liked how you said this in a few words.
Thanks. |
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Comment by: mitra - 2007-12-31 23:36
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You made a hang over sound good.. what more can we say? ;)
Good to read something from you after a while Jay. Happy New Year! |
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| I agree, great opening line man! |
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