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I took a handful of sand
and I rubbed it in my eyes
tiny grains, little cuts
to try to clear out all the lies
but the scene staring back at me
was not a big surprise.
It was like the world was in disguise.
A/N. Sondheim-esque. Little diddie done at work.
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This little diddie is quite nice.. Does indeed make you think for a while.. Isn't it just amazing how we find some mystery of the world and forget it after a second.. Weird.. Nicely written though I like your style...
(By the way even though I'm Pakistani, I have cousins living in Tornto)
