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timeakinga
Timea Kinga Szűcs
Romania, Timisoara

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Porcelain

Place me in your glass case careful
Dust me then pretend I’m useful
Read the note: “Be handled gently”
“Not for kids” and “Be used calmly”
But your numbness to my pleadings
Hurts my body, hurts my feelings
And I’m dropped and I’m in pieces
Get the broom, no use for stitches

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Up the Staircase Comment by: Up the Staircase - 2008-03-30 12:33
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This is quite an interesting take on a subject that is used quite frequently. I think you did a good job of making this poem yours and not overly cliche. I enjoy your writing. Keep doing it! :)
Matthew Eduard Abuelo Comment by: Matthew Eduard Abuelo - 2008-02-22 08:36
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I like this heart felt piece.
Glen aka FAD Comment by: Glen aka FAD - 2008-02-17 19:47
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The words here add to an ! to each line as the reader is consumed in the words...


Glen Yumang Manese
CleverCrow Comment by: CleverCrow - 2008-01-17 08:25
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Wonderful small poem, with great rhyme and reason.
jeremynewton Comment by: jeremynewton - 2008-01-13 10:54
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You really make the reader feel your pain in this one. Well written and beautifully done. Great piece.
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