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flack47
Mitchell Hargrave
United States, KS, Hutchinson

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Unfair Advantage (Wee Challenge #22)

Carl beat his gloves together in anticipation. His opponent sat on the stool across the ring from him, legs dangling just above the ground.

It looked like an easy win for Carl, but at what cost? His dignity? His self respect? For a million dollars?

The host grabbed the microphone. “Alright! Let’s play 'Are You Stronger than a Fifth Grader'!”

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DavidJ Comment by: DavidJ - 2008-02-13 12:36
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Pretty funny. For some reason, I think Carl is going down.
jakrebs Comment by: jakrebs Online- 2008-02-12 16:39
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Ha, this is very good. And in all seriousness I really liked the opening two lines, they pulled me right in.
Boonrassi Comment by: Boonrassi - 2008-02-11 10:00
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hahhahahhaahahahahaa burst out laughing at the end..
it would make a cute micro film.
T
krademacher Comment by: krademacher - 2008-01-12 22:27
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I can only imagine the MC winning, and then getting mobbed by the rest of the 5th graders
wizzer Comment by: wizzer Online- 2008-01-11 15:59
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so of course australia has to have the same shows on TV.
can just picture the facial expressions
great stuff
xxxgeo
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