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Louise
Louise Davidson
United Kingdom, Belfast

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Speed Daemon

In the afternoon I am Mark. The white powder is waiting when I get home. At night I am Two People. I am light headed but can remember a time when I had the ability to sleep, piss and get hard. But during the cling-film grey wash of the morning I am Speed Daemon... Who are you?

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Dakota Comment by: Dakota - 2008-01-26 15:05
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I'm the guy reading your stuff, dealing with the maze and the matrix hoping that everyting will make sense soon.
I'm also the guy who appreciates your words.
GarethCB Comment by: GarethCB - 2008-01-13 02:02
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Very powerful tale. The reckless paranoia really shines through. Great writing.
Rosie Sandler Comment by: Rosie Sandler - 2008-01-11 13:52
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"cling-film grey wash" - what a fantastic description.

Wonderful writing, Louise - simply told for maximum effect.
wizzer Comment by: wizzer - 2008-01-11 04:24
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yep! fab!
don't feel i can add much more to that....digesting it all/loving the end espec,: who are you
very strong writing!
well told as it stays with me creepy almost sadly believable
xxx geo
Nora Comment by: Nora - 2008-01-10 09:20
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Awesome. A lot of depth. I'm with kayc. I'd like to read more about Mark/Two People.
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