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Unfair advantage (#22)
"Jesus, what a perfectly crafted specimen he is," my friend remarked, as our teammate/mortal enemy, Brad, raced around the track.
"Yeah," I said. "We sit here and work our asses off every practice while he hardly ever shows up, but he still blows us out of the water!"
Man...I wish I was from Kenya.
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hehe... takes me back to school sports days..
i like it |
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Comment by: TaylorB - 2008-01-12 09:56
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thanks thanks
revised. |
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Really enjoyed this. You can just picture the natural athlete racing round the track, as if it's no effort at all. Great fun.
It's the second-to-last sentence that's missing its end-quotes, Taylor - you start the sentence with quotes, but don't finish them. |
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Comment by: TaylorB - 2008-01-10 13:19
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It's probably the most true story ever.
er one of them totally. |
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Comment by: karjon Online- 2008-01-09 11:49
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Ah - the long distance runner? Kenya certainly produces a lot of excellent runners.
Good one, Taylor.
Cheers
Karen |
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