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Louise
Louise Davidson
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Unfair Advantage

He said it was no contest. Cynthia was blonde and twenty whilst I was sagging and greying. He made me sound like a sofa. She reminded me of a horse; all legs and teeth. But my husband liked her. Liked, not loved, he said. He would never love her like he loved me. I always had that, I suppose.

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wizzer Comment by: wizzer - 2008-01-11 16:04
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sad poignant sofa
felt for this person
thankyou
xxxgeo
Nora Comment by: Nora - 2008-01-10 09:25
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Very well done. I hope your fictional character gets fictional herpes from his fictional hussy. And I hope your fictional MC gets a fictional toy-boy and has the best fictional orgasms of her life.
karjon Comment by: karjon Online- 2008-01-09 11:51
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'He made me sound lik a sofa.' - excellent line.

Cracking wee story, Louise - I want her to punch him and leave him.

Cheers

Karen
Informal Grae Comment by: Informal Grae - 2008-01-08 12:39
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Men. Who'd have them. They don't tidy up after themselbves and they sure don't know the meaning of respect when it comes to women.

There that's covered myself from feminine backlash.

Tight write, Louise, solid and well presented.

'She reminded me of a horse; all legs and teeth.' made me laugh.

Good read - Grae:)
Arley Comment by: Arley - 2008-01-07 19:45
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Excellent piece here, Louise! Stabbed me in the heart, we can all relate.
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