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Ithiya
Laurie Gonzalez
United States, Michigan, Jackson

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Price of Love

Love, in all its majesty,
Hast bended to one knee,
And offered soul a flower.
For my soul, it was thee.

And softly shone the moonlight there,
On every drop of dew,
That graced the petals of flowers fair,
The kiss of colors through.

Love, in all its unfair jest,
Knows this flower just past reach,
Glowing silver-amber hues,
With sweet scent to beseech.

The flower that never withers then,
The love that never dies,
Just beyond my fingertips,
The unattained prize.

As I exist beyond thine reach,
My own petals as well,
Offering promises of heaven,
And all the loss of hell.

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dreamer Comment by: dreamer - 2008-01-11 13:57
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Great imagery. I like the constrasting nature of the poem, and enjoyed the read. Thanks!
redtwinsis Comment by: redtwinsis - 2008-01-10 17:20
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Well written I enjoyed reading this great job!
redtwinsis Comment by: redtwinsis - 2008-01-10 17:20
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Well written I enjoyed reading this great job!
thatonekid Comment by: thatonekid - 2008-01-07 19:49
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that was better than i thought it would be, and it was classically written. well done.
KibaChan Comment by: KibaChan - 2008-01-07 17:45
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I like the feeling of yearning portrayed in this poem. Good work! ;)
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