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nurseytonya
Tonya Lambert Bryant
United States

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Unfair Advantage/Speed Demon in one (60 word challenge)

Flying down the road in my purple mustang, I see the one thing nobody is ever happy to see--blue lights flashing.

I roll down the window. "Can I help you, officer?" I say, offering my sweetest smile. His eyes drift to my cleavage nicely displayed above my tank top. He's smiling also.

No ticket for me today.

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metalhead Comment by: metalhead - 2008-01-23 09:18
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now that's the kind of thing i wish i could get away with!
Gary Holden Comment by: Gary Holden - 2008-01-11 23:07
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clever so clever.....I'm guessing this was a past experience? he he!
wizzer Comment by: wizzer Online- 2008-01-11 16:41
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i wish my cleavage was still up high
cute and cheeky

I see the one thing nobody is ever happy to see....? stronger to say something like i see the one thing sure to take the gloss from my day
just a thought
xxxgeo
krademacher Comment by: krademacher - 2008-01-11 07:46
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What, no tears? This was hilarious.
Informal Grae Comment by: Informal Grae - 2008-01-11 05:49
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Ah, well, it could have been a lady cop with an attitude, I suppose. If you've got twin air-bags in your car, you'd better make sure they do their job properly.

I would think about putting a comma after cleavage, but hey, when you get to cleavage, all grammatical propriety goes out the window.

Thanks for the read - Grae:)
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