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ardenbaino
arden baino
Philippines

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CAROUSE WITH AN ASTRONAUT

Jump in please, don your spacesuit and
party with an astronaut, get spaced-out
let it all out, get inebriated, annihilated,
sketch the solar system on the ceiling, make it colorful
visible lines, concentric circles, dizzying whirls
defined nebulae, the blackest, darkest black holes
quick, make haste, we are going to transfer because the martians are here, the martians are here, the martians are here, astronaut, start the engine of your lunar rover dune buggy, let's continue the fete, on the moon, lunar orbiter, like an apollo mission, artificial and natural satellites, carousing day and night, jump in please, suit up, get spaced out carousing with an astronaut

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kamereon Comment by: kamereon Online- 2008-09-01 21:15
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What a great poem...though, i couldn't help thinking of Violent Femmes when I read it
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