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Cernunnos56
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United States, WV, Wardensville

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The Worst Feeling

Chuck Clouser
01 / 01 / 2006

The Worst Feeling:

You want to know what one of the worst feelings in the world is?

When you look at the person you want...
The person you have been waiting for all this time...
The reason why you're alone...
They tell you that they still love you...
And you still love them with all your heart...
And all this time they have been waiting to see the changes in you...
And you yourself have changed while they themself twist...
You both still hurt...
You both still love...
You both still think of each other in those quiet moments...
But it is only then that you realize that there is nothing you can do...
Because it's too late, and too much time has gone by...
And they are no longer the person that you need right now in your life...
Because you both have changed so much, yet so little.


Why do people always try to wait too long before they notice something?

This is one of the worst feelings in the world.

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KeepBreathing Comment by: KeepBreathing - 2008-03-22 19:32
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Brutal, honest, and painfully true. Great write, even better read. I like it. In a painful sort of way...
Zed Comment by: Zed - 2008-01-26 10:04
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I couldn't agree more!
This is a good read.. blatent honesty, to the point.
I like it!
PANDORA Comment by: PANDORA - 2008-01-11 20:36
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I think that is the thing about love. It has become so "twisted" we do not know how to recognize it anymore.

Again, you have just written something which should be so clear to everyone but what we have forgotton.

You have a great way of expressing emotions and feelings.

You leave the reader relating this piece to their own lives.

Really enjoyed reading this.**
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