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zeabra567
Zarah M
Ireland, Dublin

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Dont Tell Me

Dont tell me...
Dont tell me that we're done for.
Dont tell me that its over,
Dont tell me that we cant be anything more...
I dont believe that this is how its supposed to be,
It hurts so bad,
Its just not fair.
Please dont say this is the end.
Please, lets just give it one more change.
Maybe things will mend.
Please just give me this,
I only ask for this.
Stay alive,
Stay alive and breathe,
Stay alive and feel my heart beat.
Dont let go,
Please dont say this is over.
Just lets go,
Hold my hand,
And lets go!
We can leave this place,
Together.
Common lets go!
Please,
Just do this for me...
Stay here...
Stay here with me,
Dont leave me,
Dont say its over.
Please,
Common,
Lets go.
Stay alive,
Breathe,
Dont leave,
Dont say Goodbye...

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RediPirate Comment by: RediPirate - 2008-08-10 21:23
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Wow, I can really feel the agony here.
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