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Comment by: mitra - 2008-04-20 09:01
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| The noble lion bit is just lovely. Very happily-ever-after feel to it but it works. |
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| Well done Gavin. I really enjoyed this one. |
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| You always write love so well. However I always note some doubt flickering quietly in the background. I am a firm believer in fate and perhaps it is so.... Nice work Gavin! |
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Comment by: GLWard - 2008-01-20 17:54
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Love at first sight? It's a beautiful thing, and only a few ever get to experience it. This is lovely, Gavin.
One suggestion- 'calmy lying'- calmly? |
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Comment by: Zed - 2008-01-20 04:34
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I can relate to this one very easily.
It is a wonderful experience, thanks for the reminder in a beautiful poem! |
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