You
You are a wonder spoke softly,
lest the angels hear and steal you away,
to make heaven a better place.
You are a dream slept sweetly,
for the pain of living will not touch us,
such beauty is not the day's to spoil.
You are a melody sung early,
a note within the morning,
a song for birds to trill.
You soar them through the sky.
You are my heart heard beating,
sustaining me when you're not near,
a strength, a wonder spoke softly.
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| I love this one, because it is gentle and simple. It doesn't try to be complex, and somehow in its quietness, it speaks volumes. Very nice... |
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| This is beautiful, peaceful, optimistic, full of love and so well crafted. Thanks. |
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| How lovely this is. Quiet and pleasing and deep. A perfect expression of love. |
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Comment by: Apollo - 2008-01-29 05:01
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| Despite my tendency to be dark and angry, I have to admit, this was well done. I felt kind of early American romanticism in it, but you had me feeling like I was enjoying a perfect sunny day on the softest grassy knoll in the best place at the best time ever. So well done. I also wanted to say thank you for your criticism, I'm not being sarcastic either, you gave me some very good ideas on one of my poems and I appreciate you taking the time to do such a thing. I look forward to reading more of your work. |
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Comment by: champagne Online- 2008-01-24 07:22
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| Nora, I'm so glad you pointed out that you think of your baby when you read this poem. I wrote it for a deep, abiding love it doesn't matter who you label with it, as long as you feel it strongly. |
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