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Amaranthine
Stuart Higginson
United Kingdom, Devon, Plymouth

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~ A Day Without Rain ~

While reading yellowed letters, each word you ever sent,
eyes blurred for misted sorrows, I feel my heart lament
the crossing we came to, and the parting of ways;
the goodbye as the sky fell, ending our days.

Evenings are lonesome, not as they’d once seem,
and night still arrives, though devoid of a dream.
I wake to each morning, yet morning is grey,
and the bed half cold; emptiness where you lay.

Those lazy, blue summers, I fondly remember,
and the magic we shared in the whites of December.
Memories … my comfort, and time’s gifts to keep
my inner-child warm, through naivety’s sleep.

On tides of thought, I sail far to your shore,
where once I found happiness, anchored before.
Now I wonder, should I know true love again,
when clouds may part, on a day without rain?




© Stuart Higginson. 20-6-2007.

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Comment by: - 2008-01-20 23:43
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Memorable piece, very touching. Sometimes people use rhyme so much throughout their poem, that the poem looses its meaning and becomes difficult to follow. But you have used rhyme very well and the whole piece works. Great job!!
celiza Comment by: celiza - 2008-01-15 03:38
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A very moving piece without being too whiny. It's very real, the emotion is easily within reach. Really nice :)
redtwinsis Comment by: redtwinsis - 2008-01-12 18:16
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I like this piece :)
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