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dbhollin
Derek Hollingsworth
United States, Texas, Houston

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"How deep is your love"

Lit Candles
Glasses of red wine
While I am kissing down your spine,

Red grapes and cheese from abroad
Lil bit of Al Green leading into some Vandross,

It’s already mine
So I don’t need to ask
Just assume the position
Let my tongue multi-task,

Your body hair stands up on end
Like to invite me in,

Every thrust, mini explosions show your love
My GOD woman your body fits me like a glove,

While on top gazing into your eyes
Climactic feelings as I grab your thighs,

Now we are out of breath
As our bodies slow to a cruise
Please tell me why the hell I’m
Now wearing your shoes,

How can you know pleasure
If you don’t feel pain
How can you truly enjoy sunshine
Without the rain,

Long distance love is forbidden
This is true
That don’t stop me from loving you,

True leaders are made
More than they’re born
Know you were made for me
And never drown in scorn,

In closing..

When this poem reaches you
And if I’m already gone
First make a copy for yourself
Then immortalize it in song.

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Misty  Rose Comment by: Misty Rose - 2008-01-13 05:55
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I think I need a cold shower now. This was a good read. Definitely!
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