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Speed Demon - Wee challenge 22
"A thousand dollars?" she yelled, staring at the table.
He shrugged, shuffling tickets uneasily. "I'm sorry. Sometimes I can't help it." Sighing, he took the most recent fine in his hand. "It's like the car needs to drive fast."
She shook with rage, swiping the papers off the table.
Outside, a small imp sat on the hood of his car.
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Comment by: precar - 2008-01-17 10:31
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| Pretty cool, short and sweet and effective! |
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Comment by: karjon Online- 2008-01-16 12:43
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Haha - loved it, Jen. I've got this vision of the wee imp swinging its legs, whistling innocently.
Thanks for the read and the big smiles.
Cheers
Karen |
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Comment by: Cherley - 2008-01-16 12:35
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| I smiled at the thought of an imp sitting on the hood. It's a much better picture than "The devil made me do it." LOL |
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Great defense but I doubt it would hold up in court. An expensive little speed freak imp isn't it.
Great flash. |
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Comment by: icy - 2008-01-15 04:56
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| Aww, I don't know why but I bet that imp is really cute! Great flash. |
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