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Requiem
Notte Requiem
United States, Arizona

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Illusion of a Powerful Love

I am leaving without saying goodbye
Ode to someone at dawn’s first light
Everything is an illusion
Gone as soon as they come

Just taking a breath
Just to feel the same pain
Little by little, happiness gathers into love
Returning distant memories, although sorrowful
They’re keeping me warm in the coldness of my heart

Within the ever revolving thoughts
Will our peaceful end ever come?
The repeated question dances in the heavens
And changes into the light of dawn’s sky

Unspoken, unheard, unseen are my dreams
Just an illusion, I had to embrace our fleeting promise
Flowing towards the other side of time
Becoming a lost child, an unforgiven wish
I realize it was a deception, an image right there

Without tears, unbreached, incomprehensive, our ending and the like
Only in the present, only in the past, only in the future to protect
It’s better if I vanish and disappear
So that I will be your sole light

I am leaving without saying goodbye
Ode to my lover at dawn’s first light
Everything is an illusion
Will I see you again?

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redtwinsis Comment by: redtwinsis - 2008-01-15 09:07
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Hum Your words touch my heart because I can relate to them...Very well written:)
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