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No poem can keep you
within walls of words
no poem can contain
what won't fit in my heart
no lines can show
what you give me
or what I see in the eyes
of the miracle who loves me
I can't say much more
my words are too weak
and break under our breath
as we kiss love on our lips.
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Excellent; reveals a deep sentiment in few words. My favorite line is perhaps "of the miracle who loves me", although the entire piece is quite honest and telling.
A poem written for those here to understand. I like how much you say with so little. The only thing I wonder is if somehow you can put more emphasis on "love on our lips". Really it's great as is too.
