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borealisart
Nora Blansett
Canada, Nova Scotia, Windsor

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Mistress Moon

At the rise of the rose coloured dawn,
the flutter of wings kiss the sky...
Yet pale is this beating of the heart,
next to a silver moon.

A golden moment of sunlight heightens the face,
A blessed chorus sings a tune to thee --
Yet a simple octave is silent and weak,
next to a still silver moon.

Mist rising to the sky in winding obscurity,
becoming one with it's fair hue --
like lovers entwined in peaceful bliss,
under the Mistress Moon.

Shifting swiftly she receeds behind her veil,
Laced in a shimmering gold --
Off to grace another royal sky,
gone my silver moon.

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NightWindSailor Comment by: NightWindSailor - 2008-01-16 19:40
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Your paint a vivid picture with the brush of words. The imagery is stunning. I close my eyes and see the silver moon rising once more ...
KibaChan Comment by: KibaChan Online- 2008-01-15 13:50
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It's beautiful. I like the way you used a kenning to refer to the rising sun. And I like the use of personification for the moon. Good work ;)
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