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metaphysicalg
George McMillan, Jr
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United States, PA, York

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Betrayed By Salvation

Betrayed by salvation
It was never the end
It hurts my heart to watch you make
The same mistake I did

The ego was purified
But only partially subdued
Now I'm back to suffer again
The cycle of rebirth continued

“Transcend the ego completely”
That's the call I hear now
“Don't follow any teaching that says otherwise”
“The path of Enlightenment is how”


January 16, 2008

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metaphysicalg Comment by: metaphysicalg Online- 2008-01-16 20:54
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Thanks! It does feel incomplete. Still working through some feelings..
redtwinsis Comment by: redtwinsis - 2008-01-16 18:44
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This left me longing for more...great read:)
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