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TaStEtHeRaInBoW
Michael Davanzo
United States, NV, Sparks/Reno

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The Way You Are

Autumn brown eyes
That screams lust

Turning hearts
Into dust

Dancing feet
That goes on for miles

Pouty lips
And your one hundred smiles

Superman
Seraphic swine

Your hands can fit
Into mine

Handsome hypocrite
Who runs away

Courageous fear
With more to say

Chocolate pelt
Labyrinth heart

Aphrodisiac
Dumb but smart

Backstabber
Horny bitch

Missing you
Inane witch

I fell in love
With the boy I knew

Not the monster today
Who’s become taboo

You’re quite annoying
Big and loud

Never nice
Mysterious shroud

You’re always wrong
And you left a scar

But I like you
Just the way you are

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redtwinsis Comment by: redtwinsis - 2008-01-17 07:46
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Mixed emotions in this piece...I like it...The rhythm of this poem flows well :)
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