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Kendall20
Kendall Penndorf
United States, Maine

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Idiot Savant

“What’s she doing?”

“Painting.”

“No, she’s not.”

“Sure she is. Just not with a brush. She does it with her eyes first.”

“Well, what is it of?”

“I’m not sure yet, but it must be really good. She’s been sitting there for hours.

“Wow.”

“I know. Dedication like that from a child her age? It’s unheard of!”

“Tell me about it. I can barely get my three to sit still, let alone get them interested in art.”

“It’s a blessing really. She sits there happy as a clam, doing something productive, and I get time for me. You know, like before we had kids.”

“You’re bad!”

“I know, but I deserve it.”

“Still, doesn’t it bother you that she’s stopped talking?”

“It did at first, but once I realized it enhanced her art, I let it go. She gets herself worked up into such a little frenzy, nothing can faze her. It’s like I’m not even here.”

“How nice. I just read an article about how children with hobbies have higher self-esteems. I’ll clip it for you.”

“I’ve been thinking about writing into one of those talk shows that interview genius children.”

“She’d fit right in with a talent like that, no doubt about it.”

“Just between you and me, Bob’s been making a fuss.”

“Oh, really?”

“But you know how men can be. He insisted we take her to the doctor.”

“What’d he say?”

“That she’s severely artistic, like I didn’t already know!”

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ericpinder Comment by: ericpinder - 2008-07-18 23:04
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Nice dialogue. Missing a closing quote " on the end of line 6: "...sitting there for hours." (Sorry, former proofreader. Things like that jump out at me.)
lancslass Comment by: lancslass - 2008-01-18 15:22
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Very well done, it's all so clear without ever being said. The last line is perfect, so often we hear what we want to hear.

Great write, Anna
Stratus Comment by: Stratus - 2008-01-18 08:03
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I liked the fact that this spilled onto the page realistically through dialogue alone. Anyone who's been around autistic children (and the range is enormous) recognizes the genius which often surfaces beneath the shell.

At first I wasn't sure if the end was a little too light and pokey toward the once taboo subject, but as LouiseKay mentioned, it's absurdity alone (for no mother would really react this way - I don't think) keeps the seriousness at bay.

Thanks-

Decent read.
Thanks --
LouiseKay Comment by: LouiseKay Online- 2008-01-18 07:43
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LOL! Great punchline! I have a son who is Autistic/Aspergers(the struggle with the real thing can be incredibly heartbreaking) and did not find this the least offensive - it's just too absurd to take it seriously. Very humorous and very well done. :)
mynamelez Comment by: mynamelez - 2008-01-18 01:42
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Liked the story, especially how she was painting with her mind. I guess we all make mistakes when it comes to pronunciation.

An acquaintance of mine once told his parents that the college he was attending was going to immunize his class against VD. It was later discovered that they were going to be immunized against TB.
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