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Beck
Dan Beck
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A Retrospective

My love is
a portrait
of you.

A picture
I've hung
in the heart

Of every woman
I’ve loved
since I lost you.

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goodmoses Comment by: goodmoses - 2008-01-18 21:04
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As artful as it is concise. Painfully revealing.
bbones Comment by: bbones - 2008-01-17 12:29
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It's poignant, even for being brief, it brings out that familiar feeling of lost love. Great piece.
precar Comment by: precar - 2008-01-17 10:42
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Some aren't like the rest, and you capture that well here, in few words.
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