writing community
Sign In Here | Lost Password | FREE Sign Up
E-mail: Password:
Remember login  
The place for writers:
Upload your writing in minutes, receive peer feedback from other writers, poets, authors, then get your work published out there in the real world.       Learn how other writers are doing it.

 
chillibeani826
Geraldine Taylor
United States, Illinois, Warrensburg

Words: 92
Access: Public
Comments: 5

Forward to a friend
Print Version
E-mail this writer E-mail this user 
View Author profile
Add to Readers  




Nothing Lasts forever

Was it me or was it you?
Oh how I wish I knew.
Once you said you were my friend,
You said our friendship would never end.
We did everything together,
On sunny days and stormy weather.
You mad me laugh, you made me cry,
Then one day you said goodbye.
The money that you came into,
Meant that our friendship was through.
I guess now you are just a memory,
No more will your face I see.
Now when I think about those years,
My eyes do not shed any tears.

Want to comment on this Poetry?
Sign up to Edit Red and you will be able to comment on Poetry and get access to: Upload your own stories and poems, get readers and their feedback, promote your work...
Sign up






[Back to top]
Comments  
CowgirlSerenity Comment by: CowgirlSerenity - 2008-01-18 11:26
Add to Readers
      
Good work, Sometimes people lose sight of their real friends when they get money, but where will they be when that money's gone, Lonely
sadon Comment by: sadon - 2008-01-18 05:04
Add to Readers
      
This is great work! I also wrote a poem with the exact same title!! Wil put it up soon...as for your writing,i like the flow.Keep writing!
Danahfaren Comment by: Danahfaren - 2008-01-17 23:07
Add to Readers
      
Well written and very good!
precar Comment by: precar - 2008-01-17 18:35
Add to Readers
      
This is very cool. It flows nicely and rhythmically and the message is clear and concise.
redtwinsis Comment by: redtwinsis - 2008-01-17 15:35
Add to Readers
      
Money is the root to all evil....and it tends to make people want more of it and become greedy...very well written :)
1

Sponsored Ads


By chillibeani826

Featured Writers

Advertising - Terms & Conditions - Short Story Submissions - Contact - Writing Competitions - Writing Links - Book Promotion - Sky-Tribe.com - alanemmins.com
  Member short stories, poems, comments and other contributions are owned by the poster.
Copyright 2003 - 2007 Edit Red I/S