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Her chest was tied tight
the first night at the old
Shibari emporium.
They gagged her pretty mouth and
flogged asymmetric patterns.
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Technically, this went awry with the syllable count on lines 2&3, but the Japanes bondage theme worked in relation to the short restricted format that is imposed upon us by the Tanka.
