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I look at you and see accomplishment,
You are my own little piece of fame,
If you are all I do in this life,
I’ll die happy just the same,
Sometimes I may not show it,
But you are my life,
Just to see your smiling faces,
Helps me through any strife.
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It is a beautiful piece. It illustrates one big message in a small piece. Its also quiet touching, like the part when you wrote “If you are all I do in this life, I’ll die happy just the same,”. great job!!
