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chillibeani826
Geraldine Taylor
United States, Illinois, Warrensburg

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My Bathroom

The waters cold
The bathrooms old
Cracks in the floor
No knob on the door
Sink is hanging
Light is dangling
Walls are dusty
Curtains are musty
Drains are clogged
By hair globs
I think we need a new bathroom.

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redtwinsis Comment by: redtwinsis - 2008-01-18 20:07
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