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Joni Ramos
Joni Ramos
Philippines, Manila

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Comments: 21

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Florence On My Way To Meet You

cobbled stone memories
surface within
the walls of my veins

church bells ringing
penetrating through
the window of
my pensione

fronting Palazzo Vecchio
Statue of David
displayed for all
admiring his manhood

IL Duomo,
I climb your towers,
escalating Campanille Di Giotto
lour'd upon Firenze

Sistine Chapel
synagogue of my soul
engaging me with
an act of contrition

landscaped above the ceiling
Michaelangelo's frescoes
naked prophets,
benevolent models of creation
witness I must
the rise and fall of man

catching my breath
as I flee the Vatican
racing for the train
amidst strangers
calculating eyes

pardon my innocence
I pass
Florence on my way
to Rome
contemplating last judgment
back to Genesis
on my way to
meet you

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Manda Comment by: Manda - 2006-07-01 09:21
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I agree with Teri about the sausages line...kinda too odd and jarring an image up against all the poetic beauty before and after it. What a lovely piece though. You can feel your love for the place with each word.
Comment by: - 2006-05-15 08:37
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i think i've commented on this before but i just read it again and felt that i needed to tell you how beautiful this is. really beautiful. the imagery is so tangible..just pops off the page. thank you for this, joni:)
heartlaugher Comment by: heartlaugher - 2006-03-26 06:14
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Love this,love your work, thanks for letting us all share.
Teri Comment by: Teri - 2006-03-25 11:08
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I've been to these places, and you've done great and wonderful justice to them! Your eloquent words, concise phrasing - pure magic, Joni. I wasn't too crazy about the line "amidst sausages", but that's JMO and a very minor thing compared to the scope of depth and beauty of your poem. Thank you again for your wonderful writing. :)
Joni Ramos Comment by: Joni Ramos - 2006-03-02 17:16
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Thank you Valerie for the Exquisite comment to my humble poem.
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