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redtwinsis
Angela Taylor
United States, Illinois, Warrensburg

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Going To School

Going to school today,
It’s not time to play,
Get your butt out of bed,
You little sleepy head,
Get up and get dressed,
Comb you hair it’s a mess,
Put on your socks and shoes,
You don’t get to choose,
You’re going to school today!

(:Dedicated to my daughter:)
(:The school nurse knows her by her first name:)

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redtwinsis Comment by: redtwinsis - 2008-01-19 08:23
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Thank you for your comments....My daughter never wants to go to school, My mother and I was talking about ti last night and I thought of this... :)
passion8poetress Comment by: passion8poetress - 2008-01-19 04:01
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My son loved it as well...great children's poem...captures the pureness of a childs morning. I sure hated getting up so early in the morning...
"get your butt out of bed
You little sleepy head"
was just what my mom use to say to me...Loved it!
Shreyass Comment by: Shreyass - 2008-01-19 00:59
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More along the lines of children's poetry maybe, I'm sure it would fit into that category, I know my sister liked the poem. Nice, short piece.
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