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We Have Met Before
We have met before.
We have known each other once.
Or twice.
Or thrice.
In ages past,
In lives lived long ago,
We have met before…
Perhaps, we first knew each other when the world was young,
When the star’s light was not yet dimmed by the glare of electric lanterns,
And the discovery of “fire,”
Was yet to be.
When the last of the great Saber Toothed Tigers still stalked the earth,
And the mighty Cave Bear ruled supreme upon the mountain.
Perhaps, then, we too walked hand-in-hand beneath those stars of yesteryear.
Clad only in the skins of the Wooly Mammoth,
We held each other close against the cold of the northern night,
As the last great ice age crept inexorably across the face of the land.
We kissed and forgot the passage of time ...
And, perhaps, beneath what’s left of that ancient ice,
Our bodies hold each other still ...
Our spirits set free,
To wander the earth,
And sail upon the winds of time,
Walking the world of dreams for tens of thousands of years.
To awaken for a brief lifetime,
And meet again.
And live again.
And laugh again.
And love again.
And then to dream once more.
And sail again upon the winds of time ...
We have met before.
Shall we meet again in this lifetime?
Or shall it take another thousand years?
Have you ever looked up at the starry heavens,
And felt you were a part of something greater than this one life?
Have you felt a kinship with those who lived and loved so long ago,
Beneath those same stars?
And have you ever wondered if the “kinship” that you felt,
Was more than just a nameless feeling?
If, so, perhaps you too were there?
And ...
We have met before.
(C) 2004 Olaf E. Roennspiess
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Hi Olaf,
I like this poem very much
We have met before.
Shall we meet again in this lifetime?
Or shall it take another thousand years?
Time - are we slaves to it? Or free from it?
Cool. You capture the stretch of it but the memory also. |
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I could not stop the chill that ran down my spine as my eyes ventured over this poem. Something too hard to decribed has wrapped itself around your words and whisper a tale. I appoligise for I cannot truely tell you my feelings of such work. It is just...pure.
Simply a poem meant to be heard only by those who are able to understand the true meaning... |
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Bill,
You've raised a fair question about punctuation and poetry. The short answer is that punctuation can be more critical in poetry than in prose, since it controls timing as well as meaning. Here's a better explanation than I can offer: http://www.explorewriting.co.uk/PunctuationAndPoetry.html
I'm using the commas largely to control the timing of the piece. However, you caught me on the location of the comma outside the quotation marks after "fire." I've read somewhere that the Brits occasionally place their commas outside the quotation marks, but I won't use this to wangle out of it. :-) Thank you for your observations, and I'm glad you liked the piece.
Olaf |
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Hello Olaf:
I usually don't review poetry because I'm not really comfortable with my command of the genre, and especially its technicalities. But I liked the idea behind this very much and I thought it was well executed. It actually evoked images in my mind's eye, which I think indicates success.
I have one question and one nit pick.
I wasn't sure why there had to be a punctuation mark at the end of every line. For example, I didn't think the comma after "fire" necessary. Indeed, it seemed misplaced.
as for the nit, if you're going to keep that comma, then shouldn't it go inside the quotation mark? As I said my knowledge of the technicalities of poetry is woefully inadequate.
Otherwise, a very, very good piece. |
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Walking the world of dreams for tens of thousands of years.
I love this part this has been amazingly written the words are just spectacular A very romantic poem and suddenly after reading this I'm getting the devilish idea of copying it down and sendindg it to my girlfriend |
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