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MsWizard
Alicia Wizard
United States, WA, Seattle

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Broadband Love

I sit and stare at the tiny icon
on my screen watching it intently
as I wait for my long distance love~

Oh how I yearn to see him
to watch mesmerized
as his sweet words flicker
like a speedy teletyped
missive across my screen~

With my little heart pattering
he types his sweet flattering
across the broadband lines
which flicker and define
the way this romance has grown~

When our airwaves are free flowing
and the traffic is light
I run to my computer
turn it on and in a heartbeat ...
I'm Juliet to his Romeo,
Bonnie to his Clyde,
Roxanne to his Cyrano~
I'm his sultry eyed Princess and
He's anything and anyone
I want him to be ...
... my dark savior ...
..... my redeemer ...
.......my man ...
.........my high resolution
...........Prince Charming ~


Who cares about
the lost art
of snail mail
or archaic dial up
when I can just
turn on my digital broad band
and receive with such clarity
and sweet worded sincerity
the http://love ...
of my long distance man.....?

@Phoenix
November 27, 2007

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MsWizard Comment by: MsWizard - 2008-08-07 22:09
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Fantasy, that certainly is a bleak and defeatest outlook...but thank you for pointing out that typo....you too Bebe, I caught your comment earlier but havent had a chance to change it. I will do so now~
FantasticFantasy Comment by: FantasticFantasy - 2008-08-07 19:15
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Hmm.
Long distance relationships never work out.
of course, neither do close distance ones.

Fourth line has a typoooooo.
=/
bebelestrange Comment by: bebelestrange - 2008-08-07 12:50
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"Words of wisdom out of the mouth of Bebe(s)*grin*now how's THAT for a play on words?"????!!!!!???????What?
MsWizard Comment by: MsWizard - 2008-08-06 07:41
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Words of wisdom out of the mouth of Bebe(s) *grin* now how's THAT for a play on words?

Thanks Bebe, I think I've got it figured out now.....*smile*
bebelestrange Comment by: bebelestrange - 2008-08-06 07:06
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Cool, this techno-love thing until...lol I'm sure you'll get that one figured out the old fashioned way in due time. Nice work-clever!Bebe
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