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MsWizard
Alicia Wizard
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United States, WA, Seattle

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I Want You (revised)

look into my eyes
deeply
seek me out
and see ...
the woman i am
i want you
to know me
i want to know you
to show you
who i am...
and the passions
that reign inside...
your hand reaches out
softly stroking my face
fingers running through
fire lit hair ...
how i
ache
for your touch
while watching you
lean down
tasting my mouth with
a persistent
insistent
smile brilliantly
seductive ...
so alarmingly
charming
a boyish grin
relentlessly ...
... warm ...
...hungry ...
your breath
on my throat
a warm sigh
your kisses
sweet flames
flicker
branding me
vibrating my senses
infusing convictions
vindicating my
certainties
and
unclouded realizations ...
a cloudy mirror
that at last
i can see through
clearly
with
all my doubts
laid to rest
as I reach out
whispering hotly
softly ...
... i want you ...

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skypoetone Comment by: skypoetone Online- 2008-07-21 10:47
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Simply put, your thoughts of love radiate every emotion quite eloquently. ~T
MsWizard Comment by: MsWizard Online- 2008-05-15 17:50
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yes...when moved by a muse emotions come through with no rhythme, thought or reason behind them...
mattarnold Comment by: mattarnold - 2008-05-15 17:45
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powerful feelng of desire conveyed in the poem...m
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