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Judy
Judy Hughes
United States, Texas, Fort Worth

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Your Heart is Gone

Light is dimming
My eyes are swimming
For the lonliness
you've left in my heart

You say you still care
and your body is still here
but my heart knows your heart is gone

Your heart is gone
Has been for so long
Why can't you admit its time to let go
What are you holding on to
the plans we made, they fell through
My love for you is still true
But your heart is gone
Has been for so long

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Myk Malice Comment by: Myk Malice - 2008-02-18 08:59
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only one typo but i know what you are saying and who its about nice though.
frankman Comment by: frankman - 2008-01-22 08:42
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Accessible and straight. Make it a little tighter, can u? And the two "has gone for so long"..can u make them stand alone in their own lines?
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