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alzariah
joanna juliette
Mauritius, social welfare centre road, Goodlands

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is it really me?

that's the way things are
broken and untidy
that's the way I have made them
could it be something else?
maybe
maybe I will try
maybe I am dreaming about it
maybe I am running away from it
thinking to have it
or I does not feel it now
that's life full of mysteries
ok, maybe it's time to know the
one I see from the mirror
Is it really me?

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poetguyraza Comment by: poetguyraza - 2008-01-28 19:47
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The last three lines are indeed brilliant though there are a few grammatical mistakes and though I write on these themes but I these are now too common on the whole it's a brilliant effort
lucy Comment by: lucy - 2008-01-23 20:36
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I love the last 3 lines, good one, sometimes looking in mirror shows all that one has to see. good job :)
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