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MsWizard
Alicia Wizard
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United States, WA, Seattle

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Illusions of You

We all carry lies,
emotional walls high,
misguided deceptions,
our own perceptions,
in all manners, all forms.

We patent our own agendas,
create our own illusions,
to show the outside.
Our barricades keep us untouched,
unseen, hidden,
so alone ... so apart..

You say,
“I want to know someone ...
... someone I don't have to lie to”
There's no need to lie,
no need to hide.
Crash those walls,
wave your flags,
the colors you've hidden,
so well ...

Scream who you are,
what you have been,
and all you will be ...

Look in my eyes,
drop that disguise,
Your camouflaged needs,
no longer exist.
I see through you.
Your flaws radiate.
Your silenced fears,
scream in my ears.
Your insecurities,
your cracked perfections
crystal clear,
as an uncut diamond.

All these things I see,
with such clarity.
And you,
flawed and cracked,
are a vision far more
beautiful to me ...
far more real ...
... than illusions of you ...

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MsWizard Comment by: MsWizard Online- 2008-07-13 17:57
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I wish I knew where all my contemplations will lead me Tony....
skypoetone Comment by: skypoetone - 2008-07-13 15:36
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No, I don't have a fixation... I just have a need for a fix, lol... that's what I get from your poems. This one tells me of a women knowing her own mind without a moment’s hesitation. Neither do I need to tell you to keep it going, you are way past that and over the hill to other contemplations.
MsWizard Comment by: MsWizard Online- 2008-04-22 12:33
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Absolutely Brokenwing...I thought so too....
brokenwing Comment by: brokenwing - 2008-04-22 12:32
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Very nice; we do think alike. Reminds me a bit of I think I Understand
redtwinsis Comment by: redtwinsis Online- 2008-01-22 08:41
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very well written thank you for sharing it :)
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