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belleame
Tiffany Zayak
United States, North Carolina, Charlotte

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Infant

That is my baby,
my passion,
my child.

It came fighting from inside me.

So what if its not always pretty.

I never clamied it would be pure.

Its just my baby.

Parts of my heart,
thrown in with an over active imagination,
teased by ADD.

It never sleeps, my baby.

Fickle and bi-polar is he.

But, this is my baby

my baby, my thrown up debris.

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Comment by: - 2008-01-22 16:48
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The love of a mother coming straight from the heart. This piece is simple but gets the point across. I liked it because it’s a sad but happy piece at the same time. The poignant parts are the tribulations that are faced, but the happy parts are how strong and full of love the mother is.
My favourite part is
“Parts of my heart,
thrown in with an over active imagination,
teased by ADD.”
Lovely piece!!
Spinnekop Comment by: Spinnekop - 2008-01-22 12:22
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Your poem is so fraught with raw emotion I had trouble finding the right words to say. And perhaps there is no right words in response. What I do dare say is: This is love...
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