Don't let go. (I dont write poetry, forgive me if this sucks ass).
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Don't let go. (I dont write poetry, forgive me if this sucks ass).
Im sorry that I do this to us.
Its so clear, like crystal, only the reflection is much more beautiful in your eyes.
I just cant open mine.
Damn it all if I cant screw up the single best thing in my life.
I just wish you would look past the insecurities that make me flawed,
And see where my heart is.
It is in your hands, so squeeze if you want… just don’t let go.
Take the time to see that this is real.
Just don’t let go.
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I really like this.
Put your faith in God.
He delivers all blessings, in abundance. |
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Comment by: - 2008-01-23 21:45
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I never knew you felt this way, you could have told me you know... ;-)
No, but seriously... Poetry is just emotion in motion in words. You've got the most important elements. You feel it. You share it.
So really it doesn't suck ass...
just balls. ( They are a few centimeters up from the ass...((depending on age))...)
But seriously again.. talk to me... Mysteries intrigue me.. so who is SHE? |
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