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Words fall to the ground------------------unnoticed
Hearts ache with pain---------------------unnoticed
Tears flow like rain----------------------unnoticed
Waited with faith-------------------------unnoticed
waited with hope--------------------------unnoticed
waited with fear--------------------------unnoticed
Love deeper and truer than ever before-------meaningless
No words can ever make a difference
One heart can't change
One heart can't accept
No difference will be noticed
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This is new. Never seen this style before. But its fine. Only that I have a little problem with it. First, I think three fullstops will do the same work all those ones would do. Secondly, "Love deeper and truer..." I think the Love Should be "loved". Think about it.
