writing community
Sign In Here | Lost Password | FREE Sign Up
E-mail: Password:
Remember login  
The place for writers:
Upload your writing in minutes, receive peer feedback from other writers, poets, authors, then get your work published out there in the real world.       Learn how other writers are doing it.

 
actionman
Dan Sheridan
United Kingdom, Surrey, Guildford

My Bookshop
Words: 196
Access: Public
Comments: 3

Forward to a friend
Print Version
E-mail this writer E-mail this user 
View Author profile
Add to Readers  

Lovesick Fool

I don't want to be just another one of "those guys",
The ones that ask your friends if you're worth the chance
I'm not looking for a new trophy or to take home the prize
Something more than just friends, perhaps a subtle romance.

I'm happy with the friendship that we've got,
Even though I have these crazy thoughts, like saying to you... "damn you're hot!"
Life is just too short not to say to you - something
I feel a special chemistry between us, a certain vibe, are you my yin?

With each day that we become closer in our friendship,
A moment of breathlessness follows, a beat my heart skips
I feel drawn to you, like no-one else stands before me,
I'm waiting for that chance to show you, what could be!

So I hold a deep breath in, as I look to find the right time,
To ask if you feel the same way, after reading this from the heart.
I'm taking a chance on you now, as I cross that do I/ don't I - "invisible" line
I hope this is not the end of the beginning from where something lovely starts.

Want to comment on this Poetry?
Sign up to Edit Red and you will be able to comment on Poetry and get access to: Upload your own stories and poems, get readers and their feedback, promote your work...
Sign up



[Back to top]


My Bookshop

Comments  
kennycann Comment by: kennycann - 2008-01-27 10:59
Add to Readers
      
Hey Dan! sounds like this could make for a good song.
Spinnekop Comment by: Spinnekop - 2008-01-24 00:00
Add to Readers
      
line 2 + 6 'your' should be you're as in you are.

Sweet poem, much enjoyed. Like the conversational style, looks more like an internal struggle. Nice work.
redtwinsis Comment by: redtwinsis - 2008-01-23 20:02
Add to Readers
      
i Love this and can relate to it right now...very well written :)
1
Bookshop

"Eighteenth Century Horror: Twentieth Century Fear"

by Dan Sheridan



Sheridanâ??s writing is wrenching, tortured and bleakly vivid. Sheridanâ??s poems dwell upon violence, death and the devil. He frequently places searingly modern issues and events within a traditional rhyme scheme. The poems in this book contain highly emotionally charged content...

Eighteenth Century Horror: Twentieth Century Fear

Sponsored Ads


By actionman

Featured Writers

Advertising - Terms & Conditions - Short Story Submissions - Contact - Writing Competitions - Writing Links - Book Promotion - Sky-Tribe.com - alanemmins.com
  Member short stories, poems, comments and other contributions are owned by the poster.
Copyright 2003 - 2007 Edit Red I/S