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redtwinsis
Angela Taylor
United States, Illinois, Warrensburg

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I Love You

I want to feel your hands run across my body,
I want to feel your breath on my skin,
I want you to touch me in places no one can,
I want to feel your lips touch mine,
I want you to feel the passion deep inside,
I want to stay in your embrace,
I want to wake up next to you each day,
I want you to know I love you.

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redtwinsis Comment by: redtwinsis - 2008-01-25 20:09
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Thank you....you would think I was in love...
DavidHe Comment by: DavidHe Online- 2008-01-25 20:03
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Hi, I have read this poem again. Perfect! You describe the love which no dictionary contains, the love you're the only person who has! Good style for love descrition!
KeikoAlvarez Comment by: KeikoAlvarez - 2008-01-25 15:49
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Sweet! Your emotions show through perfectly.
redtwinsis Comment by: redtwinsis - 2008-01-25 08:24
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Thank you for your comments and ooopppsss I fix that mistake LOL....I wish I could tell the person I wrote this for though hummmmm in time I guess....Thank you again for your comments :)
passion8poetress Comment by: passion8poetress - 2008-01-25 02:07
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When you allow people to be a part of your life you hope they make you feel like this. It doesn't always happen but when it does...it's breathless. I like this poem because it was short, straight to the point and left me breathless. Nice one!
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