She Dreams of Demon Arctos *Wee Challenge #24
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She Dreams of Demon Arctos *Wee Challenge #24
Everywhere she looked she saw silver-haired teddy bears;
some danced erratically with their ears replaced by
two-inch chiseled bone horns; some bled out synthetic innards from wounds inflicted by the demon teddies, others sat in the corner and pulled their furry parts, still others, crowded the young girl telling her to wake up.
Nightmares can prove tricky when you are young and your Mom throws out your security.
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Comment by: karjon Online- 2008-01-28 12:38
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Ooooh, I really don't want to think about anything 'pulling at their furry parts'- thanks for that image, Christopher.
Siperbly twisted wee story - loved it.
Cheers
Karen |
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Ok, so I'm a punk I'll admit it. However, after reading this the Teddies are sleeping in the closet. Well Done!
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Comment by: Arley - 2008-01-26 11:08
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| There’s an original take on the theme, Christopher. WAIT! Can’t find my blanket!!! Oh there it is . . . Ahhh, all better. Now as I was saying, Good Job! |
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Comment by: Dante - 2008-01-25 21:10
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| Sometimes I feel like my daughter's Tickle-Me-Elmo is staring at me. I never thought to write a story about it. You've done it perfectly! "some bled out synthetic innards from wounds inflicted by the demon teddies" was sick - in a good way. Thanks for the twisted teddy tale, D. |
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| Creepy - two-inch chiseled bone horns. I see a nightmare in my future tonight. I laughed out loud at 'pulled their furry parts.' That was truly twisted! Loved it. |
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