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redtwinsis
Angela Taylor
United States, Illinois, Warrensburg

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My Trip

My trip was frightening, at first,
From the fear, my heart wanted to burst,
I hopped on board and took my seat,
I didn’t know, I was in for a surprising treat,
I closed my eyes on the first flight,
So scared, I didn’t want the view in sight,
As I stepped onto the next plane,
The fears had left my brain,
Watching the shapes move across the distant ground,
My ears gave out, I couldn’t hear a sound,
The third flight, I watched it all,
Lifting into the sky, I knew I wouldn’t fall,
The images my eyes had seen,
I thought I’d only see in my dreams,
The clouds swept over the sky in waves,
In my mind the images were engraved,
Heavier clouds stood still in the night,
As lighter clouds swept over them in delight,
As the ride came close to an end,
The plane took its final bend,
The images I saw took my breath away,
As the clouds gave way,
What I saw before my eyes,
Made my stomach fill with butterflies,
Sprinkles of gold dust all around,
Showing the way to the ground,
As I sat there in a daze,
With the view I was amazed,
Then I stepped off of the plane,
My body was tired and totally drained,
Nothing to loose only to gain
With one glance, a single stare,
I saw him standing there,
My heart, I lost in one glance,
His smile sent me into a trance,
His eyes made my heart melt,
His touch was gentle and heartfelt,
He flew me to paradise,
And my trip was nice.

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redtwinsis Comment by: redtwinsis - 2008-01-25 17:45
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Thank you....not all of my poems are so uplifting.....
KeikoAlvarez Comment by: KeikoAlvarez - 2008-01-25 15:53
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Again, very sweet. You have a way of expressing feelings that I don't seem to have. I guess I tend towards the dark side and I appreciate how you can emote in such a short space.
redtwinsis Comment by: redtwinsis - 2008-01-25 10:11
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Well thank you I think LOL :)
poetguyraza Comment by: poetguyraza - 2008-01-25 10:07
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Well atleast the frightening start ended in a nicely huh... Well as they say "All's well the ends well" it's a nice poems you always have funny rhyming schemes though it's fun reading them
hawkwriter1 Comment by: hawkwriter1 - 2008-01-25 08:46
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no I am lol I like this poem it's really good
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