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crow024
Chris Hughes
United States

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Beauty and the Beast

If you were the beauty,
and I were the beast,
would people look at us and
ask, “how the hell did he get her?”
If you, as the beauty, were
to wake up one day next to
me and go what the hell am
I doing with this beast, would
you leave and would I find
another beauty, or just be stuck
with another beast and become
just beast and the beast?

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Ke28Kemn Comment by: Ke28Kemn - 2008-02-05 16:03
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this is another great one and again i love how you end it. your stuff is very matter of fact yet still descriptive and poetic
redtwinsis Comment by: redtwinsis - 2008-02-04 16:10
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Very well done :)
Comment by: - 2008-01-24 16:56
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It’s a different and simple piece, which directly does get the point across. It did tell a story in one way, but at the same time had little to say. Anyway Good piece!!
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