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Nora
Nora Gruenberg
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United States, Illinois

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Wee Challenge #24--Box

John held his breath as he opened the box. He looked at the sheaf of papers and photographs in confusion.

“What is all this?”

“It’s proof, John.”

He began to shake. If he wasn’t certain that Adele had the originals in a safe place, he would have gladly gripped her neck. He could almost feel the tendons and ligaments popping as he twisted. Instead, he finished the Glenlivet his twin sister had poured him.

“So, what now?”

“You leave me alone. I know it was you who pushed me, but Mother seems to believe I was being dramatic, as usual. Leave me the fuck alone, John, and you have nothing to worry about.”

“You’re crazy, Adele. I don’t know what you’re talking about.”

“Typical. For the longest time, I thought I was just being paranoid, too. But know that if you try to do me in again, you will be exposed. Mother will see I haven’t been lying and the shares in the silver mines will never be yours.”

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Nora Comment by: Nora Online- 2008-01-29 14:00
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I'm definitely considering it, homegirl.
icy Comment by: icy - 2008-01-29 09:19
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Oh I love how this twins with the other one. You have to turn both into an actual story!!
Arley Comment by: Arley - 2008-01-26 10:12
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What are sibling for if not to blackmail each other? Yes, the roots of a lengthy soap opera are definitely sprouting from this seed you’ve planted, Nora. Very good read!
krademacher Comment by: krademacher Online- 2008-01-25 22:22
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somehow, I am envisioning a part two where John has his own set of compromising pictures (or a will gets read, and the family dog inherits everything).

Cool one, Nora.
Dante Comment by: Dante - 2008-01-25 17:00
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I don't know how to say "boring" in Italiano, Nora, but that word should not even be mentioned in the company of this story. I love the family rivalry. It intensifies the raw emotions of this piece. Great write, D.
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