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Shorty
Ashlynn Von Gunten
United States, Tennessee, Murfreeboro

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Twisting And Turning

Twisting and turning I go through my life no knowing what to do or who I am
This storm came to me and caught me by surprise it tosses me from place to place and will never let me stay in one place
It spins me around again and again until I’m so dizzy that I don’t know where I am or what I’m doing
The storms spins me once again and as I spin I catch a glimpse of you what I see is you holding your hand out to me I see your lips say I Love You come back to please
I try to get away from the storm but I can’t and we both know that this is goodbye until next time
But before I’m completely gone I yell out to you that I Love You and always will the last thing
I see is you crying but smiling at the same time and then I’m gone

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